Edges (Terza rima)
Edges (Terza rima)Soft echoes tremble, touching walls of night,the single prints will tell shes come alone;her gown- a kiss of green on seasons white.In moonbeam- tinctured snow, she lifts a stoneto...
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Saluting you here mate. An uncommon choice to introduce yourself with, but extremely enjoyable. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work, if this is an example. Partir cst mourir un peu.
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Hello Chris,Welcome at the Tir!Lovely to see you here and to read your Edges, as you know Terzas are one of my favourite forms and yours is great! with a big welcoming smile,Leny
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Thank you all for the kind replies. Teagan, this is indeed an example of my work. Oh, I have been accused on occasion of writing in the same ole voice too often. Leny, thanks for the welcome. Do I...
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You handle the rhyme scheme well, and this is an edgy poem. It catches you on a level beyond its words. Welcome. Post more -- especially Terza Rimas.
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